Stranger

Taking comfort in strangers during a difficulty during life

   I've taken comfort in a stranger,

I've lost myself in someone new.

 

   Surviving in a foreign world,

looking for a heart that's not my own.

 

   Wandering around with blind eyes,

a million miles from my home.

 

   I took comfort in a stranger,

I lost my self within someone else.

Reviews

[Dutch Jr.]

Intiguing... although it was short, you still managed to get a point across, which is important. We all need someone to confide and take comfort in during difficult times.

[JenLyn]

A very good flow and you said so much in so little words. It's deep and a bit mysterious to me. Overall a good write! Keep it up! :)

[SetApartGirl]

a very good piece. it had really good flow. keep writing!