Caravel Day

Caravel Day

A Chapter by Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

Andrews POV
It was Carnival day in town. All of us went and when we got there we decided to go in groups.
Me: "we should be in groups."
As soon as I said that Stephanie went and lached on Lauren.
Lauren: "ok I have Stephanie in my group."
We all laughed.
Me: "ok there will be a group of fours and one group of threes."
Everyone: "ok."
Me: "ok the groups are: Group 1 Ally, Demi, Lynda and I. Group 2 Lauren, Camila Dinah and Stephani. Group 3 Sabrina, Sarah, Shannon and Normani. 
And the group of 3 will be Dallas, Dylan and Maddie."
Everyone agrees and I put a tracking chip on Stephanie and Maddie since Maddie is the same age as Steph.
So we all split up and my group went to the Farris wheel. I am scared of heights and Ally noticed.
Ally as she grabs my hand: "it'll be fine I've got ya."
I turn to her and smiled.
Me: "thank you"
We give the guy our tickets and get on.
We get to the top and got stuck up there.
Guy over speaker: "we are having some technical difficulties we have a guy on it so please remain seated and calm."
Demi: "where will we go?"
I started to freak out until Ally kissed me. my whole body just shut down.
Me: "what was that for?"
Ally: "to calm you down. why you didn't like it?"
Me: "no I didn't like it"
Ally got a sad face and started to tear up.
Me as I grabbed her chine to look at me: "you didn't let me finish. I didn't like it, I loved it."
Ally quickly kissed me again and giving me a huge hug then moved on my lap."
Lynda: "boy she's happy."
We laughed and my tracker was going off telling me that either Stephanie or Maddie left their group.
Me: "we need to get down there now"
I start panicking.
Demi: "who left the group?"
Me: "Stephanie did."
Ally: "I'll give Lauren a call."
Me: "thanks."
Demi: "and I will call Dallas to see if Maddies still with them."
*Moments go by.*
Demi: "Maddie is safe."
Ally: "does it say where Stephanie is?"
Me: "she is at the toy tent."
Ally: "you hear that?"
Lauren: "ya on our way to find her I'll call you back"
Ally: "ok"
They hang up.
Ally: "They'll call when they find her. Don't worry Andrew they will get her."
Me: "it's not that I thought Lauren wouldn't get distracted to keep an eye on her."
Ally: "but Dinah is with them as well so you can't blame Lauren."
Me: "I'm sorry I just get overprotective of her. She's the only family I have. She has a speech problem like me and she looks up to me and I can not lose her."
Ally's phone rings.
Ally: "hey you guys have her?"
Lauren: "no we dont. we looked everywhere but no sign of her."
Ally: "WHAT YOU CANT FIND HER?"
Lauren: "Ally please calm down."
I grab the phone from Ally.
Me: "what do you mean you can't find her?"
Lauren: "we looked everywhere but can't find her."
My alarm wasn't going the tracker was in her hello kitty backpack.
Lauren: "we only found her backpack."
I hang up and we were finally moving.
Me: "OMG OMG OMG."
I start tearing up knowing my little sister is nowhere to be seen.
Ally: "we'll find her Andrew."
Me: "it's not that. She doesn't have her backpack the tracker is in her backpack."
We get down to see everyone at the bottom waiting for us.
Lauren comes to apologizes.
Me: "we need to search for her we also need security to help."
We find the closest police officer.
Me: "hi excuse me"
Police: "hi what can I do for you?
Me: "I lost my little sister can you guys help? Here is a picture of her."
Officer #2: "we're on it."
Me: "thank you so much."
We all split up to look for her and no sign of her anywhere.


© 2015 Andrew (MJ) Nugteren


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A scary ending. I liked the journey and the caravel. I liked the description leading to the ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent chapter.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

9 Years Ago

You are so welcome and always glad you like my story
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I liked this chapter a lot and you are welcome.
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

9 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote

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