Leave Hulk Alone Or Else

Leave Hulk Alone Or Else

A Poem by Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

Even here, even in peaceful forest they will not leave Hulk alone!
Wherever Hulk goes, enemies follow him, try to hurt him!
Why? Hulk does not know! 
All Hulk does know is When enemies attack Hulk fights back and smashes HUH?
Is not enemy, is tree! 
Hulk is attacked by tree??
What �"? Now other trees attack Hulk and rocks  flying rocks!
Hulk is confused  doesn't understand!
Hulk LIKED trees. Hulk LIKED rocks.
Hulk thought they were his friends �" Hulk's ONLY friends �"
But if peaceful forest attacks Hulk, too �" then Hulk has no friends �"
and Hulk will crush anything that gets in Hulk's way!
Do you hear Hulk, rocks?
Do you hear Hulk, trees?
Leave Hulk ALONE �" or Hulk will make you REGRET it!

© 2014 Andrew (MJ) Nugteren


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The source of this material is The Defenders, issue 12, 1973, pp. 2-3, written by Len Wein and copyrighted by Marvel Comics, Marvel Entertainment LLC, The Walt Disney Company.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

7 Years Ago

I know it is
It is extremely creative of you to write it in this way. You do a great job at showing the pain that Hulk feels.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

9 Years Ago

thank you very much
Love this, the use of language and phrasing adds to the effect. Give you the true feel for a character we can all relate to and recognise.
I like the passion i can almost feel his anger and hurt within himself, the honesty and struggle of understanding.
Brilliant work

Posted 10 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

9 Years Ago

thank you dear friend
I really like this. I think it was rad that you wrote it in the way the Hulk would speak and think. If you need to talk to anyone, I'm here for ya. I'm glad I got to read some of your poetry again! :D

-Savior

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

10 Years Ago

true and thank you :)
Savior of Time

10 Years Ago

You're welcome! :)

-Savior
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

10 Years Ago

:) :) :) :)
I like the poem. I like the Hulk too. He liked the trees and the rounds. My kind of hero. Good to read your words. I hope you are doing okay. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

10 Years Ago

thank you :)

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Andrew (MJ) Nugteren
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

Crystal Beach, CA



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Hey,I'm Andrew Nugteren (People Call me Michael Jackson)! I'm 18 years old! I like to read Fan fiction books and I like writing poems. I enjoy comic books, and hanging out with my friends. I have a do.. more..

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