Happy Birthday Dianne (my aunt)

Happy Birthday Dianne (my aunt)

A Poem by Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

Happy birthday Dianne.
Today's your birthday and we wish you all your wishes come true.
Hope you get Birthday money ;-) ;-).
Love to wear lipstick (most females do tho).
Hope your updated on the Biggest Loser.
We all know you love use kids (no doubt).
Your really pretty, nice, funny, and cool.
When you need me to babysit, I'll babysit.
Happy birthday Dianne.

© 2013 Andrew (MJ) Nugteren


Author's Note

Andrew (MJ) Nugteren
her birthday started like right now

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It's a nice message but you might want to work on the content and detail, but you can tell how much you care :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

thanks :)
So sweet! Love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
Awwww! Your aunt is so lucky!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

thank you
aww this is so sweet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
It's really sweet for yew to write this. And it's really good. But is her bday march 10th...?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

:)
Kitten

11 Years Ago

:p
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

:P
sweet :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

thank you
awwwww how sweet!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
Honestly i didn't like this piece, it seemed to be written poorly and in parts it dosent actually make sense as a piece itself
But i can sense a sweet and affectionate layer to it probably linked to the connection of the person you are referring to which gives it a nice feel to it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

thanks for the truth :)
I'm sure your aunt enjoyed this very much.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

she did
How sweet, i wish i had more contact with my aunt =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

oh you will at some point in your life

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Andrew (MJ) Nugteren
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

Crystal Beach, CA



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Hey,I'm Andrew Nugteren (People Call me Michael Jackson)! I'm 18 years old! I like to read Fan fiction books and I like writing poems. I enjoy comic books, and hanging out with my friends. I have a do.. more..

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