one heart one beat (poem)

Your your only person

You have one personality.

You have alot of friends.

Only you have a long life to live (depends how old you are).

You might have people tell you to be someone different.

You don't have to listen to them.

You can be who you are.

You have one heart.

Your heart is beating fast per mineit.

If you want to be someone else then go ahead but that won't change who you really are.

If your being someone else then you might not go anywhere.

If your being your self then you might acally go somewhere.

I know that cause 1. I'm being your self. 2. I'm doing my best at working.

But right now my job is paper dilivery.

Author's Note

sorry for spelling. just ignore them

Reviews

[Zahra]

very nicd. Nice thoughts

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you :)

[Darkening Shadow]

So true. Great Poem!!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you =]

[skyelight]

Wow. Love the coloring :) It really adds character to your poem which is cool. Do you really deliever papers???

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thanks and ya

[Tavionna]

Do you really work as a paper delivery person! If you do that job looks fun! I've always wanted to deliver paper. Great poem, everyone has to always be themselves.

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

ya i do and thank you and true

[Ari]

That last line made me smile! Good job

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you :)

[Craig2591]

I really like the line, "If you want to be someone else then go ahead but that won't change who you really are". The last line is such a non sequitur. I like it.

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you =]

[SW..if..TY]

nice nice nice!!!!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

yep yep yep

[blegh]

i love it. it gives people confidence and it makes them realize they are beautiful just they way they are

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you :) everyone is beautiful and and handsome

[blegh]

yep :)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:)