Gone going..............gone part 1

Gone going..............gone part 1

A Poem by Andrew (MJ) Nugteren
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this is how I feel right now

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Gone going doesn't really mean it's gone.
I just feel like I haven't seen my brother in years.
I miss him so much.......I don't know what to do if he left.
I don't want him to go like that.
He's my brother and I love him no matter what he does.
I wish I could see him more often.
I hope he's OK right now.
Ya he can be a pain sometimes but still love him.

© 2013 Andrew (MJ) Nugteren


Author's Note

Andrew (MJ) Nugteren
Well that's all I have right now

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I feel that way about my little sisters. =] Great Write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

well at least I'm not alone lolz well that's nice of you to think of your sisters =]
Darkening Shadow

11 Years Ago

ya =]
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

=]
Even though I don't have a brother I know what that feels like. You did a great job putting your feelings out there and expressing your emotions. I think this is great and I hope you see your brother soon! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

lolz that sound like a crazy family
skyelight

11 Years Ago

Better believe it lol thank god I only live with six of them now. :)
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

lolz true
That how i think my older brother, do you have a brother ? =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

ya
Separation is hard. Especially for the family. I like the concern and hope he is okay. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

no problem
I understand this. I really hope everything is going to be ok. And yew get to talk to/see him soon.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Kitten

11 Years Ago

Welcome. ^_^
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

^-^
Kitten

11 Years Ago

:D

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Added on February 22, 2013
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Andrew (MJ) Nugteren
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

Crystal Beach, CA



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Hey,I'm Andrew Nugteren (People Call me Michael Jackson)! I'm 18 years old! I like to read Fan fiction books and I like writing poems. I enjoy comic books, and hanging out with my friends. I have a do.. more..

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