Personality like a kid

this is a good thing to be thinking when your babysitting

Thinking like a kid is ok.
Some days I think like a kid and think like a grown-up and some days both at the same time.
When your babysitting it's good to think what they think.
It all depends on how your personality is.
Like me.
I can think and have the personality like a kid and not afraid to show it.
So if you have the personality or thinking like a kid then that's a good thing.
I had great times and memory's and I don't care what people say bad things about me.
If they have something to say to me then say it to my face.
At least I'm a real person for thinking and having a personality like a kid.

Author's Note

Hope you guys like this poem

Reviews

[catofjade]

Hon, I really like this, but it's two different poems, actually. One is about the personality and thoughts and feelings of a kid vs a grown-up, and it is a fine little commentary on said subject. The other is about not caring what or when people say bad things about you, and that theme has not been developed well enough here, which it proper, because it really belongs in a poem of its own. You have a lot to say! Take your time and write it all down, and continue to share it with us!!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

well thats the whole point of this poem just to let you know and thanks

[Ama May Cooper]

A lovely message, a little unclear in parts and grammatical errors make it hard to understnd in bits, but with a little work this could be fantastic. Nice work

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you

[Holly Mason]

very much enjoyed
thank you for sharing

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you and no problem

[Zachary_James]

I really love the structure of how you wrote this. Love this..

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you I wrote it cause it's true