Who am I

I don't know who am I

Who am I?
I don't know who I am.
I feel so lonely.
Even if I'm around people I love.
I question myself everyday saying "who am I?" and "is this the real me?"
I need the truth about myself.
Is there someone out there that can help?
Do I need to change?
Or do I need to stay myself?
My head is spinning and full of these questions.
I can't think straight.
My head is pounding.
I need a reason why this is happening to me.
I really need someone to tell me two of the most important question.





Who am I? and Do I need to change?

Author's Note

tell me the truth please

Reviews

[blegh]

you are you :)
this poem made me wonder too
it has a good tone to it

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you :)

[catofjade]

Ok, I will. Who you are is much less of an answer waiting to found out "there", in life somewhere, so that you have to try to figure out the clues as to how to discover it, and much more of a decision. Although your environment, relationships, situations, etc. etc. all contribute to who you are, they only do so because of your reactions to them, and those reactions are totally in your hands. So you decide if you're a good guy, or a bad guy, and if you fall down, to get up, and if you mess up, to set it right, and so on so forth...or not. This is your story, you are the author of it, so make sure it goes the way you want it to, in the parts you can control. For example, you may not be able to control what happens to you tomorrow or in a month from now, but you always have a choice as to how you react to it; if it's an upsetting thing, are you going to allow it to dominate you or are you going to dominate it? The questions you ask here are questions every single one of us asks at different points in our lives, and the answers are always what we make them to be. The free will of man is a powerful thing. I think you're awesome to put yourself out there with your writing the way you do. Sorry for writing a book(let)!!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

lolz no worry's

[Kitten]

Who yew are right now. (From what I can tell.) Is great. And even if. This isn't yew in the future. It's who yew are now. And yew may change some. But just be happy with who yew are now. :)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you :)

[Kitten]

Welcome.

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:)

[Kitten]

:p

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:P

[Kitten]

:)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:)

[BL]

You are you and you don't need to change, just be who you are and keep being who you are.

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:) thank you :)

[Salar Majak]

you NEVER change who you are! EVER! people love you for who you are an you'll make a big mistake in changing yourself!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you and i won't change

[Salar Majak]

:] i'm glad

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

same

[Holly Mason]

Like the fact that you are questioning yourself in this piece
maybe you have the answers...thank you for sharing

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you

[AYVID N]

Just go somewhere quiet, close your eyes and really think hard. You'll get the answers.

I like this poetry because it questions self and some basic assumptions that we make about ourselves.

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you

[C.C. Marx]

Sometimes it hard to figure out who you are or what you want to do.....hell, I'm still trying to figure things out!! I get ya, know you're the only one wondering

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

true and thanks :)

[C.C. Marx]

My pleasure of course :)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:)

[Tasha]

Don't ever change for anyone. You are wonderful the way you are. Great write.
~Tasha

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you :)

[Tasha]

My pleasure :) message me if you need to

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

kk :)

[Tasha]

Kk :)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:)

[Tasha]

:)

[The Fallen]

We cannot tell you who you are, or the fact that you need to change. You need to figure that out yourself.

Very nice write.

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you