What would happen?

What would happen?

A Poem by Andrew (MJ) Nugteren
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I don't know if this is true or not

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What would happen if I was never around? What will the world be if I wasn't alive or didn't excised? What will happen if I lost all of my friends that I meet? I ask myself all these questions and can't find the answer. Did I make a  mistake or something wrong? All I ask is a redo in life. I just want everything to be normal again. I don't want things to be weird with me and my friends and I don't wanna feel like my best friends hate me. I need someone in my life that I can talk to. Someone that I can ask for advice, questions, and my personal things and need someone that can listen to my problems. I need someone to be there for me when I need them. I don't want someone to be a lier and tell everyone about my life. I need a true friend and not a fake friend. I just wish I can start my life all over again. I wish I knew that I do have a true friend. I need some help to find that true friend.

© 2013 Andrew (MJ) Nugteren


Author's Note

Andrew (MJ) Nugteren
If this is true or not I just hope I do have a friend like this

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hey.........it's a great poem fella/..........................but if u wannna my opinion then i'd say that if u're writing a poem,then write it in a row/.....etc..........
anyway.........ur wor'd's r good........
have a cheerful day...........

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

thanks and i think other people do different ways of writing poems but thank you very much of review.. read more
krish

11 Years Ago

ya......fella...it's too cooll....
.do what u think good....
but.....if u write in this .. read more
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

lol
This is a really good poem packed with emotions! :) Keep it up! 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

:D
The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

:)
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

;D
This is a great poem! I like all the questions that you ask and that vulnerability you are leaving as a person when you wish you knew if you have a true friend. At some point in our lives, we end up asking ourselves how many true friends we have and sometimes our responses are nothing.
Keep it up!
-KS

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

thank you and i will
Good questions came to life from your poem. Mystery of love and death. Do any of us have a purpose? Good to desire reason and purpose in a life. Need good friends to make worthwhile. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

thank you and we all need someone in our life

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Andrew (MJ) Nugteren
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

Crystal Beach, CA



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Hey,I'm Andrew Nugteren (People Call me Michael Jackson)! I'm 18 years old! I like to read Fan fiction books and I like writing poems. I enjoy comic books, and hanging out with my friends. I have a do.. more..

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