i'm in love

are you in love

It's the first day of school, and I see the most beautiful girl in the world. She's in one of my classes and I'm shy when I'm around her. After the first month I asked her out, she was shy to answer. So I ask her again and she said YES. I was the most happiest guy in the world. After in November her birthday was coming up. So I asked her what she wanted, she said she didn't want anything. So two days till her birthday, I wouldn't want to fell like a bad boyfriend so I got her a beautiful bracelet and a funny card. Then on her birthday I gave the beautiful bracelet to her, and she LOVED IT. But the thing is when she first saw me....................................she fell in LOVE with ME.

Author's Note

this is a "love at first sight" kinda poem.
hope you like it

Reviews

[Soul Fire]

awww so lovely!!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you Raya

[Soul Fire]

you're welcome

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:-)

[Edward]

A very good poem. well done!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thanks dude