a love poem that cought my atenchin

You asked me if you were PRETTY, I said NO. You asked me if you were FAT, I said YES OF COURSE. You asked me if I WANTED to be w/ you forever, I said NO. You asked me if I would CRY if you walked away, I sad NO. You heard to much, and need to leave and, as you walked away... I grabbed your arm, And told you to stay. I said... Your not PRETTY, Your BEAUTIFUL. The only thing FAT, or BIG, about you is your HEART. I don't WANT to be w/ you forever, I NEED to be w/ you forever. And, baby, I wouldn't CRY if you walked away... I would DIE.

Author's Note

lovie dovie much lol

Reviews

[LoveDens]

very heavy and nice!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank u

[Soul Fire]

aw,cute. some grammar errors, but good work!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

lol ik and thank you

[Soul Fire]

you're welcome

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

>_