Your eyes

Your eyes....
It's so hard to tell
if they are of fire
or ice.

When you look at me
I escape into them
For they have become
My undying vice

There is a haze
that magnifies their beauty
they pull me into them
Where your secrets lie

My heart May have touched
heaven
And reached a space
Where I am truly alive

And as I patiently wait
Letting you peer
So deeply into mine

Letting you into
my very own secrets
That I know you can see
With your eyes

Reviews

[Rm]

Very descriptive poetry.....I like this eye thing! :)

[Samer Al-Abed]

"And reached a space
Where I am truly alive
Letting you peer
So deeply into mine"

...... this... this is deep. I stared at those lines for a while. That doesn't happen often lol VERY NICE! :)

[A. Fiorillo]

Aww...thank you very much. :) I'm so happy to hear that...

[Pooja Sharma]

Wow, another poem that made my imagination dance!! Its really good. :)

[A. Fiorillo]

Thank you!!! :)