The final Crack

There is this desirable pain that has conquered my life for years,

It tears at my soul and sends vilolent attacks to my heart,

leaving it bruised , cracked, and seared,

I wish there was a way to depart,

Yet the lies still relish and the understanding never comes.

 

The darkest decay of pain has finally grasped hold of my heart </3

 

The last crack has been punched in deep,

but the idea of death only seems smart.

 

Bye

 

 

Reviews

[Enigma]

Raw emotion. You penned it well. Good job.

[stars are far]

This was written in a so nice way..
But it is sad .. I loved that.. Hope you never feel it ...
Well done =D

[Cassie Fraga]

WOW!!! your ending "BYE" packs this piece with one hell of a punch!! such a sad hand behind this write, reaching out... you expressed well here.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Stament and grand standed, well done

[Kayla Etreni]

speaks out,
love it