Sad

sometimes I find myself sad!

In the world we are blessed,

yet in life some are cursed,

 

I'm that some.

We hide in allusions,

as the fabrications of life overtake us,

 

Yet they warn me not to fuss.

 

We try to belong,

but they fight for are failure,

 

Its the repeat of a sorrowful song.

 

We lived through society,

we conqured what they failed,

 

Yet alone I continue to feel.

 

Author's Note

I wrote this just because I'm really sad and upset and poetry calms me down, so enjoy it as much as you can.. Thank you

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is a beautiful piece that reflects your emotions, at that time... very heartfelt, Andrea. Nice write!

[Cassie Fraga]

TRUTH!!! **nuff said**

I appreciate this...

[joshua deathdealer]

I love this poem. Very touching and true...xx favorited*

[Seshat Nidaba]

You know Andrea, you employ in this piece one of my favorite psychological devices of all time, the disclosure of vulnerability. This kind of writing, never gets old, all confessional and cozy, I REALLY enjoyed this read.

This underlining trick felt really original and authentic in your use of it here.

[Shayla Sayer]

i really enjoyed this piece, it honestly hit home. love yuh, drea.

[stars are far]

This was soo nice ,and you showed your feeling of sadness ..
Great poem ..

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Life is written throughout this poem. I can see it. What "they" say, and what "the world" believes, as opposed to what you feel, and what you think. This poem expresses your feelings, and my favorite line is "as the fabrications of life overtake us" because all of us truly do eventually give in to what we live in, and just take things as they come.