Pointless

pain can be the worst company :(

He gives only wrath,

when i never get mad,

he enjoys the light of my smile so sad,

and strangles my voice,

as his eyes pierce of darts,

as i struggle to breathe with my depression filled heart,

wanting to know what makes him so mad,

as he threatens my mind with his words of bad,

POINTLESS....

I see no love,

Just a boy who my feelings he shoves.

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

To the point and truly sad.
A day in the life of being
pointless.. Beautifully sad
indeed...

[Crow]

Such heartfelt imagery of someone being mentally torn apart. The sad thing is our world is full of this reality.

A beautifully written piece.

[joshua deathdealer]

Aww everyone seems to be having relationship problems. I like it..thx for the review and the fr..xx

[Shayla Sayer]

a lot of guys seem almost soulless, and as if they dont even care... its even worse when they pay you attention at first, when you yourself arent interested yet... and then when you want them back, their attention just... ceases, and they act like you're scum, not worth their time. remember, that even these ppl will get karma someday. you have friends who LOVE you, and care so much for you. i tend to count myself among them.

[stars are far]

this was so nice and straight to the point
so many boys are like this now ...