five o' clock schedule

The sky illuminates with light,

as the day begins,

with gentle winds and stiring peace,

cobwebs glisten with the morning dew,

as the birds take flight,

and whispher ther coo's

through the frosted windows,

this subliminal scene,

dances before my eyes,

and offers a gift,

to my soul as it dies,

unlocking my thoughts,

from realitys terrible bind,

my five o' clock schedule,

wher i can free my mind..

Reviews

[Tasha]

this had a great and powerful message and imagery.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Touching and a great message, powerful imagery and an almost eulogy effect in the prose, the flow is sporadic at times but I feel this was on purpose but may not be clear to most readers, well done, good work