Endless sky

Neverending,

forever more,

the sky extends,

theres many doors,

open one with the will you might,

extend your mind to every sight,

take in the signs of gods insight,

discover the world,

in its curtain of light.

Author's Note

I feel its to properly rhymed, I would like some real criticism on this piece

Reviews

[stars are far]

this is so nice ..well done

[Shayla Sayer]

i really like the image of the doors...