The Other Side

 

Theres a boy and

On the other side,

Theres a girl.

 

Both made a commitment,

but both have made dents,

Some in many ways than more,

but in all regards,

Both chose to shut that door.

 

Each believed the lies and dug for truths,

Which ended in many sighs and a reconcile booth.

 

Now the two each held there pride,

Which only leads to more arguments of the souls that died.

 

The balance is lost and therefore its the key,

But there's a boy and

On the other side,

Theres a girl,

Who most likely cant see.

 

Both made a commitment,

but both have made dents,

Some in many ways than more,

but in all regards,

Both chose to shut that door.

 

Woman are a mystery and Men are of pride,

Some go to boast as others rather cry.

 

These two are different to the extent that they see,

that there partner is unbearable,

 so close your eyes and count to three.

 

One.

Two.

Three.

 

But still there's a boy and

On the other side,

Theres a girl.

 

Without the two the world would be cast away,

as it is the two shall make each
others day.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Your writes are good...Pen on./..:).............

[Shayla Sayer]

please post more soon

[Luke L]

Great writing, awesome imagery

[Dr. Wood ?]

interesting read....It surely would be the end if there were no boys or girls...You need to alter the spelling of THERE..in Now the two each held THEIR pride....and WOMAN are a mystery should be WOMEN...Small things I know...But it makes a difference....I too thought of this as a song

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Seems to be formatted as a song...in the lines of this work...the repeating stanza...as this unfolds of the boy and girl in the story line...and you switch the mood in these lines:

Woman are a mystery and Men are of pride,
Some go to boast as others rather cry.

[zainul]

You have made a great game of a boy and a girl who make the world together a reality.
Very sweet piece.
Very lovely thoughts.
A great message for the people who believe lies and take pride as well.