Music, Our Savior!

The music we hear is bliss and it's calming

The music they hear is loud and appalling

Our music, it shapes us, it creates us whole

Their music destroys us, we're in for a fall

Our music is divine, a gift from the Lord!

Their music is punishment, the stab from a sword

We dance and we laugh, a jolly good time!

The weep and they cry, their music's a crime

We'll live and we'll prosper, this music our guide!

They'll die and they'll perish, to hell they will ride

As Lucifer whips them, burns them, and kills them,

We will proudly march on, this music our anthem

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[Black]

The weep and they cry, their music's a crime

isnt it they weep??
i think...
lol it is nice :)
a very religious piece though :)
thank you for sharng!

[Legacy]

Andoux,

....

I sit and ponder on that, and to that point I make this one (who is the one true Judge?)

Great write in any case, you had form and flow... everything that poetry is made of.

Have a wonderful day,

Legacy