Angelic Morning

A title with a double meaning

There’s a light leading up, to the shadows calling me

Sapphire springs bubble in shade, a starlight ride to the moon’s fading

Golden dreams hang on wires, floating desperately

Dewdrops shimmer and slide, tears the world feels on its demise

Silver fires shine clear, a crisp burning light to guide the way

The passion of September’s wings, gliding amber to the misfortunate death

Break around the bend, her lavender eyes ablaze

The bloom of springtime shares her gifts

 

Reviews

[SamBug]

Very creative. I love how you put spring is here in the hidden message of orange.

[emmajoy]

Spring is here!

What a clever and beautiful piece of work! What a delightful sentence: 'a starlight ride to the moon's fading '

The fine format encloses some incredibly creative phrases and memorable pictures.

[kewlbluetiger]

Very wonderful piece of work. Creative format reveals a special meaning, which added to this poem's metaphorical playfulness. My favorite line was here: "Sapphire springs bubble in shade, a starlight ride to the moon's fading/" I loved that starlight ride line. I love the spring.

[Legion]

I like those gifts. Wonderfully penned (or typed). You are talented. ;)

[Lizanne]

Wonderfully written with metaphors. Summer leading into the lovely season ofAutumn. The moon is waning and the leafs dangle from dead stems, upon release by a brisk autumn breeze, do a jerky hither and fro dance. Autumn passes away
The possible raking and burning of the leaves on a cold day. Leading into winter with it's reflective firey ice. The awaited crocus announces Spring is here. Everything is reborn.
Only my interpretation. But it is a stunning poetical writing.

[deeps]

This is a very well written write here
I like this.

[Voice11]

I like it. It develops an image of springtime, and I like the hidden message too lol!

[Greg Skura]

Every picture tells a story, every story tells a picture!!!!! I love the almost surreal imagery you have created with your words. Thank You for sharing!

[Vitamin A]

I enjoy the creativity with the font, it really makes this poem. Every line flows so well, I wouldn't change a thing.

[Eagle Cruagh]

I have no idea what you said.
What I think you were writing about is
somewhat erotic, at least sensuous.

What you have written may be refined and
rehashed a thousand times, but it will always
be a great paining of an important part of life.
It is a fabulous work of art.

The writer again demonstrates that she has
many gifts, talent, imagination, intelligence,
everything that synthesizes into master writer.

Thank you for the loan of your poem

Rating : 100 %

------ Eagle Cruagh