Vivacities

Almond windows of intelligentsia,

Clandestine, Covert.

Limitless imaginings, 

in your steady gaze,

Adventurist temperaments,

inspiration in my compositions

Pale and futile

These Ivory feats

Light and bright white smile lines

Pink and gold flecked

Cheeks

Shutter sounds reverberate

A Coolly hiding disposition

 

 

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Are you intelligentsia ? Hiding behind almond windows ?
You are intellectually extraordinary .
Just teasting and I dont think you hide anywhere, you are
a very up front, forth right girl.
Your poem does seem a bit obscure. Perhaps that is because
I am not a poet.
Obscure or lighted by spot, it is a delightful poem written in
a stylized fashion,
Beautifully done. Thank you for sharing .

Rated: 100 %

------ Eagle Cruagh

[Clockwork]

The allusion you make in the first line is nicely done. I like how you carry the idea though the entirety of the piece. I must admit that the piece was a bit hard to follow the first time through, but a second read cleared things up. I'm not sure that I like the single word lines, but other than that this piece was well done.