"A Definite 'Keeper'..."

"A Definite 'Keeper'..."

A Poem by Chris


"A Definite 'Keeper'..."

There is a moment

when before a single word is - spoken
there IS that look -

the one reflected in your eyes

that says more than you ever thought

  you had within you
that means more of who you are
  than even you knew existed...
that one instant of recognition
that second's pause of

...puuuurrrrrrrr.

A definite 'keeper'.

Chris

© 2012 Chris


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The art of pauses is something I think I need to explore next.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Chris

12 Years Ago

Highly useful... chuckling here. Hi man, nice seeing you.
Surrendered to the moment, enraptured by its outcome...

That moment reflects an eternity - all in an infinite inhalation...

Lovely!

xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


Chris

12 Years Ago

You pause so nicely... Its good seeing you.
Lovely thoughts - brings a smile as I read. Love the puuuurrrr at the end.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think I'd like to experience that. thanks for putting it into words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Chris

12 Years Ago

Recognizing a "Keeper" is easy... having one is much harder...
Brittany

12 Years Ago

Truth
Nice! Sugary sweet! Love this!....it's puuuuuurrrrrrrfect!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Chris

12 Years Ago

It's meant...
As a "KEEPER", it is our obligation to spur our significant other to regard us as such, is it not?
I intensely enjoyed the flow and your choice of idioms within this piece. Stir-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-ring, heh-heh!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Chris

12 Years Ago

Sometimes only a true Puuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr will do.
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So sweet :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


short simple and sweet!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A definite keeper

Posted 12 Years Ago



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