"Life..."

"Life..."  - Senyru

The world still remains -

our lives we share as we can,

so many time zones...

 

Chris

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[Enid Blake]

The last line makes this. Modern, relevant twist.

[Invisible]

true as true is, had to look up senryu to remember what it meant lol

[Chris]

well good! I'm glad you came back.

[Invisible]

i'm always here, just not always seen, lol.

[Chris]

I can appreciate that statement...

[Invisible]

indeed, tis life sometimes.

[Renée]

Simple & true..and I realize it's time to grow..

[zainul]

Yet another lesson for me-
I am impressed once again.
Chris introduces senyru...

[...]

I don't care about forms and styles, only the touch. You, sir, are touching :)

[Muse]

that's the beauty of the internet...time zones no longer matter so much. :)

[S. Michael Long]

structurally similar to a haiku.. but senyru (: brilliant.. and beautiful.. i enjoy your educated understanding of writing forms and styles! well done Chris! -s

[Nautili]

It is an amazing thing that through technology we can converse with people from different time zones, at the stroke of a key or the touch of the phone pad. Pretty amazing world we live in.

[Circe]

to me this represents the idea of progress and awareness.. in that we are now sharing more about each other than ever before, and are more aware of global issues, it's all part of life and the world we live in, very much enjoyed this write.

[nevermindfan1991]

o me, o life.