"Breathe..."

s M t w t f s

"Breathe..."

...and I wanted to find you,
if but for a minute,
a second... a heartbeat
a moment's blink...

an eternity's gaze.

I guess that says it all
doesn't it?
The wanting - to find
another
for even an instant.

We can't always have...
but god we CAN hope,
and just maybe -

maybe find
the need to remember how to breathe
- in our lives.

Chris

Author's Note

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Reviews

[emmajoy]

Wanting to find is the heart calling to be touched .. and what a beautiful heart. Such tender words need come alive, to breathe and understand.

[*** Hey Jude***]

I adore this. Yes, be free to be consumed with the breathe of Amore! We were not here to be alone, but to "as they say" Love One Another. Easy! ~ Jude :-)

[WhiteWillow]

A breath takes only a moment, and so can a meaningful connection with another.

Wonderful parallel.

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Ah...

Poetry that breathes...

[Cassie Fraga]

yes.... sometimes we forget to breathe...
I loved this write mistah... Hope is so magical in its ways!! thank you for sharing!!
**keep that ink flowin honey... Im diggin yo style!!**

Hope within a lovely soul as yours is never to late.
Wonderful expressed the essence of an elusive thought.

E.L.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Good one and I like your particular indentations, and conversational style.

[Judas Hammer]

truthfully a little disjoined. Finding someone and breathing. Just seems forced, I know it was intended to be emotional but I felt rather surface. Like you didn't experience this emotion but heard about it. Unless your saying in your poem you waiting holding your breath, either way seem one dimensional.

[sharonlee]

an eternity's gaze... and a moment to breathe.... you weave majik my friend