"Behind Your Eyes..."

a soft wonder...

"Behind Your Eyes..."

When a woman is a girl... and a girl is a woman
life is a wonder-full adventure and so full of

tastes and colors... Sense and scents...
It takes your breath and holds you so tight
- you're finally so aware and alive!

So where DO your thoughts take you? 
Are they just behind your eyes? 
or in your heart and soul? 

Do your thoughts softly stroke you in your dreams? 
Hold your hands, touch your cheeks?
How does a woman - be - in-love ...quietly?

Chris

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sara]

We can be in love quietly. Like you said. It's all behind the eyes.
(this is me, quietly admitting I loved your poem)

[Heather]

its in our touch, the small smiles and eyes that never leave yours, its in the attention, devotion, giving of ourselves to that person we love.. completely.

This is a beautiful write.

[just is]

Where do the thoughts take you - to heart
Are they behind my eyes - in the midst of them yes!
My heart and soul, roams and tells my head what to think often.
When I dream, I dream of a love so wild and free
that the emotions can't even explain me.

A woman is nothing but pure depth.
After all you can't have a woman, without a Man.
Wo-Man - so love is deep and wonderous.
Least that is my opinion. Enjoyed this pondering read.

[Deandra Dawn]

Very nicely done :)

[Teri B]

I love the first line of the last stanza...I'll share the story it reminds me of with you some time.

A fine piece, my friend!

[emmajoy]

How? She sighs, smiles, laughs and.. just knows.

As always your words touch places where thinking sits quietly and dreams must surely come true!

[Suditi]

Wow!
This is such a beautiful piece.
I dont know if its possible to be in love quietly..but this poem is so beautiful..
The flow is so nice.. Its almost like a song!

[Michael G.]

Well done, sir. Ask the questions every man, (if he is smart and courageous enough) to ask.
As usual, you set new levels to try and achieve.

[olla]

there is loving and there is being in love.. two distinctly different things... both are in my heart and soul..

[Renée]

This writing is lovely..So soft..like its subject....Love...OoOoOOooo ... I say heart and soul...so many types of love that enter our lives..parents, first love, lasting love, children.. Some noisy, some soft and silent.... "To Life" !