"Spiderweb's ...webs..."

 

 

"Spiderweb's ...Web..."

Glistening, gleaming... dew drops
rippling in a breath
How I wonder
as I wander
patterns

...ever bold

ghostlets formed and woven
in mind's delight
over - nights of days

and every day's night

Little twists
quiet trysts
echoes of life's silent smile
shimmer

shiver
float and quiver
as I ponder
sitting here ...awhile.

Chris

Author's Note

sunrise ~ sunset...

Reviews

[Cathy Wattam]

This is a beautifully constructed poem. I absolutely loved it. Stunning imagery and I especially loved the line "ghostlets formed and woven in mind's delight". Excellent piece of writing. More like this please.

[sharonlee]

Beautiful....

[emmajoy]

A series of sweet pictures, a touch of heaven .. watching and waiting for the light to gently show every second, every facet .. a place to be, watching, seeing .. wondering!

'Little twists ~ quiet trysts ~ echoes of life's silent smile ~ shimmer ~ shiver ~
float and quiver ~ as I ponder ~ sitting here ...awhile.'

[Wendy Seames Garner]

This is a delicately woven piece that I'll have to ponder for a while.

[.....]

Love the rhyme and the use of alliteration throughout this. Wonderful rhythm and flow it creates. Your metaphor is lovely as well. Creates lovely imagery throughout and I enjoy reading it over and over just experiencing the flow of it. The things we think when we sit and spell a while. :)

Blessings, Tammy

[J. J. Nightingale]

Sometimes we need to just sit .. and ponder .. awhile ..
listening to the echos , of all the silent smiles .. ..

Soft .. Quiet .. .. Jazz

[Michael G.]

Solid piece on something so delicate.

[Ed Hart]

nothing like a spiderweb to set the mind aroaming

[?]

Those spiderwebs can be a work of art...but oh my how sticky they can be when you walk through one..lol

echoes of life's silent smile
shimmer
shiver
float and quiver

[h d e rushin]

"echols of lifes silent smile
simmer shiver" this assorted assonance is too the point...I like this..