"How Does Your Mind Work..."

"How Does Your Mind Work..."

A Poem by Chris
"

Its Tuesday - go figure

"


“How DOES Your Mind Work…”

I can’t believe!!

Say WHAT???

WOW

WHOA!!

Man, that’s just - I don’t have the words to…
You sir, are sooooooo…


So many pause, look; seemingly fall from their chairs

(at least they said so - rotflol DOES mean that right?),

or stand speechless (hear that as well - but, speechless means -
well, nevermind), or say nothing at all (a lot of those) but return
again and again.  Some applaud even to the point of emoticons
carefully selected to SHOW presence and approval.  And

occasionally, a word is sent - by a ‘someONE’ whose very

presence leaves ME speechless and childlike and fidgety,
KNOWING I am NOT THAT good… that to be even on the

same page as their COMMENT - damn!… when that happens
“LIFE IS GOOD!!!” know what I mean?

 

I even get asked, “Just HOW does your mind work?”

 

...and all I can really say is, "Barely."

Chris

© 2012 Chris


Author's Note

Chris
feel free - its Tuesday

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Good commentary...for TuesDAY...

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Ha..if you think you're mind is working "Barely" ... makes me wonder about how or how much my blonde mind is working.."Not Hardly" ... lol

Sometimes..you're mind blows me away...just sayin'

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice, nice work Chris!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh, how I love your sardonic wit. Barely functioning for you, my friend, means I'm on life-support.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I always had the opinion Tuesday's were good for something other than getting you to hump day in a timely manner. Now I know it is here so you can give us this solid piece of work. You play well, sir.

Posted 12 Years Ago


"barely", huh? :)
somehow i don't believe that

Posted 12 Years Ago


WOW, it's tuesday?

WHOA, I almost spilled my Venti

WHAT in the world are they doin' over there?

Most days I just wonder how a majority of society is able to dress themselves...

.. the mind works both ways, and usually mine is intermittent at best.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Interesting to write a poem concerning reviews. I think they are subject worthy because sometimes I find them more interesting than the poems themselves....hmmmm, maybe we should have a blog site where we can review the reviews....lol.
I liked this, and from the small amount that I have read of your work, I can see why people are impressed. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


You make me laugh Chris! I was asked by someone recently if I understood your poetry. I think I get it, but it is hard to explain to the unenlightened. How can you say your mind barely works? It takes a lot of hard work to write in your unique style. I'm pretty sure that special someONE agrees with me.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Someone's loving on ya, eh, Chris? It's always grand to be appreciated and feted, isn't it? I'm glad you're being made to see the worth of your writing! It's important! *hugs*

Now, get back to work! Writing won't get done by itself, ya know! *snickers*

Posted 12 Years Ago



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