"How Does Your Mind Work..."

Its Tuesday - go figure

“How DOES Your Mind Work…”

I can’t believe!!

Say WHAT???

WOW

WHOA!!

Man, that’s just - I don’t have the words to…
You sir, are sooooooo…

So many pause, look; seemingly fall from their chairs

(at least they said so - rotflol DOES mean that right?),

or stand speechless (hear that as well - but, speechless means -
well, nevermind), or say nothing at all (a lot of those) but return
again and again.  Some applaud even to the point of emoticons
carefully selected to SHOW presence and approval.  And

occasionally, a word is sent - by a ‘someONE’ whose very

presence leaves ME speechless and childlike and fidgety,
KNOWING I am NOT THAT good… that to be even on the

same page as their COMMENT - damn!… when that happens
“LIFE IS GOOD!!!” know what I mean?

 

I even get asked, “Just HOW does your mind work?”

 

...and all I can really say is, "Barely."

Chris

Author's Note

feel free - its Tuesday

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

This is witty, honest, interesting, sarcastic (just a little) and a well constructed bit of poetry - I can see why Poppy put it in her faves

[Ruth]

Smiles...just smiles...to read you is to read you several times in a row...and ALWAYS want more...

[Jay Levon]

brilliant ending

[Dani California]

hahaha @ barely. Our minds are what deceive us. Our life is what defines us. Or do we need to be defined? Hmmm. Says....?

Or so I believe... not to say, right ... wrong... it is what we believe it is. Right?

I LOVE the fact that you give the reader something to chew on ... something to take away with them. Nice. Very nice. Thank you, Chris.

[Southern Cross]

Barely works for me..even accompanied with sardonic humor..I salute you with my 2nd cup of coffee as I LOL

[Penlady]

I'm wondering about one of your good days if this is barely. I love your Tuesdays.

[Emerald Seas]

This is fabulous! (are we on the same page?? - lol) I am chuckling as I re-read your piece and completely relate. My mind is always "on" - but is it really "working?"... now THAT is the question. Usually I am daydreaming of crap I shouldn't, can't, or don't have any control over. So... "barely" works for me

[Larry Dyson]

mine not at all..im officially retired.

[Cre8nFrmWithn]

You are a comic by trade, yes? I loved this entry! To read this and not leave a comment would be unlawful!

[Monique]

LOL, I like this!!