I'm intrigued with the line,
"of tomorrows' memories-to-be"
This backdoor, implied-type way of showing the gear-like relationship of the past and future, is something that I'm naturally drawn to. I dont feel like I ever really learned about it, it just comes natural for me to say. I wonder if this is a thing all writers or just people all experience and think about.
You are insanely poetic, great write.
Though I quite disagree with you on the age and strength of the coffee, I otherwise echo this sentiment wholeheartedly. The idea of coffee actually murmuring its promises to the drinker is captivating...
Also, Tuesday seems like an excellent day for coffee if it's necessary to go collect one's thoughts from their situation.
I'm intrigued with the line,
"of tomorrows' memories-to-be"
This backdoor, implied-type way of showing the gear-like relationship of the past and future, is something that I'm naturally drawn to. I dont feel like I ever really learned about it, it just comes natural for me to say. I wonder if this is a thing all writers or just people all experience and think about.
You are insanely poetic, great write.
The only issue I could possibly have with a poem as good as this, is the fact I don't take sugar in my pots of espresso. It is a superb poem, multilayered and with marvelous and aromatic imagry that opens up the senses and allows the mind to roam of possible stories within the poem. Every time I read you I always find myself asking my I don't read more.
I really liked this Chris. Can't comment on structure or anything, but I know I read it twice because it made me feel curious and also i could see images as I read this.
"Life is a terminal disease." All the doctors have basically told me so.
"Life is an adventure... Pain, well you deal. Thanks for being here. 06/21/2020
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