"Lifescapes..."

thoughts...

I read Pricilla Moore's "Wake Me Up".  This one fell from behind-my-eyes...

"Lifescapes... "

Retrospection.

introspection ~

"What's IT all mean?!?"

Why is the sky?

Where is blue?

Who is tomorrow?

When will I - be?

Sigh...

 

I wish so hard -

and don't even know

the whys or the fors...

just that I want -

something

more.

More than what is, was, has been.

More than I can touch, dream, wish...

more than everything.

I've got "life" - bad.

 

Chris

 

Author's Note

Thoughts...

Reviews

[Lena M. P.]

The "more" is what sets us apart. The wants and needs to be more, have more, feel more. This is a lovely, expressive piece.

[sharonlee]

Sigh... on wishes & dreams....


Shar

[Amy Bumpas]

Yes, life, we breathe, but we have to mean something too...to someone,
to the world...

[Penlady]

The "more" is what you are for. You put a name to it all, define the need, explore its depths and breadths and say its okay to feel. I feel the same. It seems that "more" has to BE and the hope keeps the hope alive.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Life is a good thing to catch .. ..

ME.

[Lilly Negoi]

"i've got "life" - bad" - this is simply infectiously perfect!

[Ed Hart]

i knew a fellow like that once...none of his zippers worked

[Me]

Great poem, loved this

[Ruth]

"Got life"...life is something that I wish I knew the why's to...
Calculating and driven with precise quality xoxo

[Emily B]

have I told you lately how glad I am that you found us here?