November...

College town - co-eds hmmm

November, 2011... Light jacket - warm.  Teens with "Life-rushes" coloring their sights.

"Drop-Dead-Gorgeous..."

Sidewalk Cafe`
traffic - walkers, joggers
meanderers - wanderers
rushing and rushing - purpose
- on purpose - for... something,

anything, another thing-reason-wish-want.

and you flowed into
existence
sight
life
a "presence" - in mid-stride your head just
turned and your eyes...
YOU looked into my eyes
reasoned glance - paused, locked-step
and I saw your "purpose"
- your choice, intent, you fully KNEW...
and then
THEN
a half-smile
and
you continued on.

I made your day -
I looked, appreciated auburn
aura
flawless
child-become-woman on a November day.

You KNOW you're drop-dead-gorgeous
now
that lil extra swing and spring
and the life-flush
...priceless.

Chris

Author's Note

Warm day...

Reviews

[J Todd Underhill]

Ah you flirt! making the Coeds blush as the rush to their classes. I am so jealous it hurts. I remember living in a college town and the beautiful sights that came along with it! Ah to be in Bozeman once more :)

[sharonlee]

Oh so priceless...and expressed with beauty and a heady rush....

Peace
Shar

[Amy Bumpas]

Don't we all want to be noticed, and just that little smile...

[Kenneth The Poet]

I love how you describe your surroundings and your moods on these days...very refreshing for sure.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Enjoy Your Day .. .. ..

ME.

[Emily B]

everyone wishes someone will notice . . .

and I can't imagine any girl would see you and not smile :)

[Penlady]

Nothing like appreciation for nature..all part of human nature! You've shared a delicious moment as only you can!

[?]

Warm day indeed, lol
It is always nice when someone makes your day.
Wonderful write Chris