"I Can't See Your Eyes..."

"I Can't See Your Eyes..."

A Poem by Chris

"I Can't See Your Eyes..."

We build sand castles all our lives
and wander life's waves
as they crash all around.

Each tower dissolves in the swirling ways
walls softly crumble...
windows fill, droplets fall
kingdoms melt into other days.

I still sit on the sea walls
- watching lives crash ashore
and 'tween each shimmering wave
you melt away and away
'til
I can't see your eyes
through the tears.

Chris

© 2011 Chris


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Chris
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Heartbreakingly beautiful. A love of a lifetime....just beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sigh...hauntingly real my friend.

Shar

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Chris

Lansing, MI



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