"Tap, Tap-Tap..."
A Story by
Chris
Its all in the ... beat-ing.
"Tap, Tap-Tap..." Tap, tap-tap, tap, tap-tap... Rod Serling's Twilight Zone wasn't so out of place - just time...Tap, tap-tap, tap, tap-tap... even the cars stay away cobwebbed streets - minds - lives the Cavalry came ...and was buried with full honors.Tap, tap-tap, tap, tap-tap... "WILL YOU STOP THAT!!!" no, no-no, no, no-no... --- SLAP !!!---
...yesss ma'am ... ...silence... Chris
© 2011 Chris
Author's Note
"...memories - sweet and always gentle on my mind... memories..."
Tunes just echo. Tap, tap-tap...
"I can sit so still a self-winding watch - won't. Takes learning..."
Reviews
I read again and your poetry speaks differently each time its read. Sad, and I remember learning to juke...
Posted 13 Years Ago
I heard not tap, tap but rata-tat-tat and looked out to see the woodpecker, tapping
the tree, not really a tree, just what was left, a dried up vestage and wondered what the message was, tap-tap-tap, that redheaded bird, so absurd, yet the only thing telling me good morning.
Being quiet is wonderful, does take learning but once it clicks, how far we can go with it.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I heard not tap, tap but rata-tat-tat and looked out to see the woodpecker, tapping
the tree, not really a tree, just what was left, a dried up vestage and wondered what the message was, tap-tap-tap, that redheaded bird, so absurd, yet the only thing telling me good morning.
Being quiet is wonderful, does take learning but once it clicks, how far we can go with it.
Like Morse Code, or those computers of old that spat long rolls of message tape. Nice work.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Like Morse Code, or those computers of old that spat long rolls of message tape. Nice work.
Awesome, loved it, brought a smile to my face
Posted 13 Years Ago
Awesome, loved it, brought a smile to my face
This is a great piece and it made me laugh! Fantastic job.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is a great piece and it made me laugh! Fantastic job.
Yes...it does take learning.....
Shar
Posted 13 Years Ago
Yes...it does take learning.....
Shar
This poem reminds me of abuse and the silence to still....
Posted 13 Years Ago
This poem reminds me of abuse and the silence to still....
This is good and funny!
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is good and funny!
Tap tap tap .. someone must be at my door .. I know cause they were here , before.. will they come in ..and sit a spell .. will I remember them so well .. Some one must be at my door.. I know cause they were here before ..
Jazz ..
Posted 13 Years Ago
Tap tap tap .. someone must be at my door .. I know cause they were here , before.. will they come in ..and sit a spell .. will I remember them so well .. Some one must be at my door.. I know cause they were here before ..
Jazz ..
drums . . . two days I've been be-set by drums
Posted 13 Years Ago
drums . . . two days I've been be-set by drums
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Added on October 6, 2011
Last Updated on October 6, 2011
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Chris Lansing, MI
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