"Kisses..."

"Kisses..."

Do you ever listen to the rain?
The staccato sound -
like heartbeats
life beats,
afters...

The feel of it -
each a touch
and as rivulets form
and they FLOW...

Each a breath seeping
into and dissolving
adding me to its existence
to a new level of
being...

Drifting with -
so sensual...
the sheer smooth and utterly filling
knowing
all the wishing wanting and every WHERE
that needed touching
flow
of you with
... me.

I love the rain...

Chris

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship D..]

"Kisses..."
A Poem by Chris


I enjoyed the philosophy of this poem. The sensation of the sounds, and the unfelt-feeling of the rain falling. You have sunk me in. Now, I lay and think of days of old laying in the floor during a rain storm. The rain falling on the gutters of the house, the window fans buzzing, the wind blowing in from the cracks of the walls. I thank you for posting, and thank you even more for writing this.

~S. D. Blankenship

[roarke]

there's a difference between city rain, country rain, and deep forest rain. I've experienced all three and prefer forest rain. It's quiet, gentle, refreshing. Forest rain is a natural feeling, not like the resistant, combative city rain or the rinsing,drenching country rain.
Kissing in the veil of forest rain makes you one with the elemental essences around you.

[Teri B]

Rain has its own seductions...as does she, it seems. :)

[Desert Dreamer]

The rain can be soothing, and...yes...so much like kisses.

[J. J. Nightingale]

It is a baptism .. a cleansing a life flow .. It is the shed tears of all .. mixing with and showing empathy for .. us

Jazzy ........

[sharonlee]

Sigh... I too love the rain... and the places it takes me.
Shar

[Penlady]

I do...and I do too...love the rain , even more now that you have explained it all for me...thanks for the gift...
stunning is your view and tender all in one...

[Emily B]

just the thoughts I needed to get me out of here and on to all the next things . . . how did you know? and thank you

[Crowley]

I certainly do feel free after reading that....and I love a woman with wet hair.....sorry TMI.