"Kisses..."

"Kisses..."

A Poem by Chris

"Kisses..."

Do you ever listen to the rain?
The staccato sound -
like heartbeats
life beats,
afters...

The feel of it -
each a touch
and as rivulets form
and they FLOW...

Each a breath seeping
into and dissolving
adding me to its existence
to a new level of
being...

Drifting with -
so sensual...
the sheer smooth and utterly filling
knowing
all the wishing wanting and every WHERE
that needed touching
flow
of you with
... me.

I love the rain...

Chris

© 2011 Chris


Author's Note

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i too love the rain, the sound, the feel, the rhythm of the drops...how it refreshes...a lot like love...that touches everywhere that wants or needs touching.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I feel humbled by nature's sighs and tears, her flushes and chills, they all create an expanse within us, a chance to weave ourselves through the ribbons often not seen or felt as they brush across the cheek and hand so readily held out to feel. We are often submerged and never see the clarity when we are - soaked and quenched...beautiful xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


You whet my imagination with these well chosen words... filled with sensuality, the softness, and the soothe is enrapturing. Poet, I am thoroughly showered.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I specially love this idea :
"Each a breath seeping
into and dissolving
adding me to its existence
to a new level of
being..."



Posted 13 Years Ago


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It's funny I had a spare few minutes and stopped into read a bit, hoping to catch up somewhat.
I stopped in and found this, and was thinking somewhere around the same things, as it is raining here today and was lying on the couch listening to the rain every little drop, like every little heart beat. When you close your eyes the rain beats can be so soft and so sensual at times.
What a lovely write Chris, I too love the rain

Posted 13 Years Ago


Feel free to write more poems like this! It's not just a pleasure to read, but it's also a joy to hear when read aloud.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The imagery here refreshingly cozy, so insightful and brilliantly penned. Great scott! Thank you for sharing

Posted 13 Years Ago


Interesting metaphor, beautifully written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Chris, this poem was so beautifully tender. The rain storms can be scary, but the rain described here could lull a person with insomia to sleep!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Rain can be a beautiful thing....

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Chris
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