Jacob has also caused the ring of the hammer on the nail in his comment...to you Chris, (something common you make very un-common with your wording) me thinks it is the heart of you is so unique...but then I know an exquisite heart can feel exquisite pain.....
this is significant for me...i have some friends i have had for 40 years or more now...
they have stuck...but others who had gone a little more than half that...they disappeared...and it makes me wonder...what did i do? or was it that they just wandered off?
good poem Chris...
something common you made very un-common with your wording.
Now Im crying, this was so moving, and emotional, especially for me , for me to read.
I can relate so much with this. You have written this so well and so beautiful.
Awesome piece,
So glad I stopped in for a bit, hoping to find something wonderful to read, and I have.
A wonderful poem. I can easily relate to the sentiment you have penned down. The structure accentuates the overall effect of the work. Its simple and beautiful. Well done.
beautiful story of the love/loss cycle. I'm not sure if it every breaks completely or just loops back around. I like the stop-and-go flow, very affective and relative to the overall piece
"Life is a terminal disease." All the doctors have basically told me so.
"Life is an adventure... Pain, well you deal. Thanks for being here. 06/21/2020
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