"Puuurrrrrrrrrrrrrr..."

"Puuurrrrrrrrrrrrrr..."

A Poem by Chris
"

We keep our promises

"
Real or Memorex? Non or Fiction?  This one is for Laury's lil friend... Ashlyn...

"Puuurrrrrrrrrrrrrr..."

I saw a Dragon... in the clouds scudding by.  It passed so quickly into, through and then beyond - that all I could do was breathe... and witness.  I saw the smoke wisp from its nostrils... the utter absence of existence in its eyes. 

...And its touch!!
the mist as it crossed the land. 
The sheer SIZE as it dwarfed
  EVERYTHING...
and the silence
- after its ROAR!!

I saw a Dragon...
and god - it saw me.

Chris

© 2011 Chris


Author's Note

Chris
Even Jackie Paper grew up and had a son... just ask sometime...

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Does this make you the rascal Puff? =) I really enjoyed reading this poem, especially the "absence of existence in its eyes". I can only imagine the feeling of realising a dragon had seen me as it flew by. Great imaginative writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh.... gave me shivers of delight.... and morning smiles....

Shar

Posted 13 Years Ago


strings and sealing wax and other fancies..as a gift...she loves it Chris..giggled a lot at the roars...she loves play acting...ty again.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have seen a few Dragons myself

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I saw a Dragon, I even saw the Leviathan once . . . it was HUGE . . .

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

But I did Lambi...
I saw a Dragon...

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the ending. "I saw a Dragon...
and god - it saw me." haha. It's great, but that was an interesting format. Good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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