"I Could Kiss You..."

"I Could Kiss You..."

A Poem by Chris
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...yes...

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"I Could Kiss You..."

...and you WOULD feel it
and so would I.

And if I did -
would my kiss add to the silence
as you lie there awake each night
- the silence amidst all the noise
we throw into our existence
and sort
and sort
and sort through
again and again
with each tossing and turning driven night
into day and everyday existence
we breathe and taste so hard inside
and outside until all we can see IS
"...Damn, I was kissed... damn..."

Chris

 

© 2011 Chris


Author's Note

Chris
...yes...

More is being said here than merely one most obvious level... and even then more are being 'touched' than even they know...

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there are kisses, and then there are kisees

Posted 13 Years Ago


What an explosive kiss.
So much pressure building up.
Calculating thoughts
all shrouded around
a simple kiss.

Posted 13 Years Ago


visceral...so many levels we live at and evaluate...racing thoughts keeping our minds reviewing the days as 'why did He ..or when did she say that...'when sometimes all we needed was JUST A....kiss...interaction on a human touching person level...Just sayin'

Posted 13 Years Ago


Didn't realize a kiss could answer so many questions.

Posted 13 Years Ago


kisses seem to be inspiring your muse at the moment! Loved this poem, describing something very simple so that we see its beauty, gorgeous:) (makes me want to be kissed immediately ha!!!)
and this is
and this might
the kiss

Posted 13 Years Ago


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damn I feel like I've just been kissed. haha
This was great.
A kiss says so much, and there are those that you never forget and are woth the remembering.
This was beautiful Chris

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ah sigh to be so kissed....damn I remember those lol! I love this chris...xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Chris...I love this piece, it speaks so much of the yearning for that special "kiss"...the ones we remember that really spoke to our hearts...you know those "good ones".
There's not much better then a real good kiss The ability to read someone through kissing is exploratory closing your eyes so you can focus on the feel reading body language through only lips at first then perhaps a little tongue, slowing things down, speeding things up, kissing softer, bite a little, etc. Then you can open your eyes and peek.

Posted 13 Years Ago


that's when ya know ya got it bad....

There's so many kisses. The one's that linger in the mind, set themselves apart long after the experience, those are the real kisses, the ones that last a lifetime. I've had a few of those, and damn I was kissed....

Posted 13 Years Ago



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