"Kodo..."  Poem

"Kodo..." Poem

A Poem by Chris
"

Remember to breathe

"

You ever swirled your SELF to the heat of kodo - 

its another taste of the world... (Open the links in seperate windows)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IT_nZ4ZPHLg

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dWx6u9kbJT8&feature=related

"Kodo..."

Feel the heat
feel the beat
listen
to it flow
Taptaptapping
rap-bump
tap tapping
Bu-bump...
Happening
flowing

FEEL the HEAT
the beat
flow
flowing
TaBump tapping
ratatat
move it - move - flow
right, left, back
twist and twirl
flow
round and in
out and back
right, left,
back, twist, UP
twirl DOWN
back
flow
move it - move - flow

Feel the HEAT
LIVE the beat
listen and BE
to it flow
Raptaptapping
rap-bump happening
tap tapping UP
Bu-bump...DOWN
Happening right
flowing left
Twirl twirl twirling round
move it - move
F L O W
FLOW
flow...

Remember to breathe...

and do it again...

Chris

© 2011 Chris


Author's Note

Chris
oh YEAH!!

And yes to "breath = breathe" - thank you...

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If music is the food of love, then play on.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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oh yeah! indeed
Drums are good, love the sound of drums, drums are energizing, loved the videos
But somehow this made my mine waunder a bit, lol


Posted 13 Years Ago


indeed... don't even need to listen to those drums, you caught the spirit.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Fantastic, absolutely! I'd imagine the drums came before the poem?

Read your words first, then watched/heard the video; then, I re-read your words more quickly as if each line was a beat on the drum .. even more fantastic!

I love the sound of drums, they're like heart beats, everyone is different, different, different! One gets the feeling of energy from a drummer as if he or she are sharing life with you. In the video the players create real drama, standing in such a way, leaning into the 'instrument', faces, bodies intent, strained yet controlled .. amazing stuff. Equally your poem has amazing movement but in a near structured way .. so clever, Chris .. unique theme too

Posted 13 Years Ago


Elemental!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Powerful rhythm in both your words and the drumming video..... conjures.... thoughts that flow....

Posted 13 Years Ago


well said and done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Had a dancey, free feeling...:))

Posted 13 Years Ago


absolutely!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice!
Went well with the beat on the link.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 14, 2011
Last Updated on August 16, 2011
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