"Kittens And Puppies..."

I was speaking with - not to or at, with - another poet this morning about how we 'see' poetry and words.  And yes there were diferences BUT there were also consistencies and understandings.  We spoke of imagery and its use, need, and place.  And at the end of my side of the conversation this one breathed into existence.

Its not an example of ANYTHING... its just a thought that needed being heard.

"Kittens And Puppies..."

A kiss is so simple...
such a lil -

insignificant
nothing
that held me so rooted to the spot
as she turned and ran
back
to her friends.

I couldn't say
...anything at all...

Chris

Author's Note

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Reviews

[olla]

spontaneous delight.. kittens and puppies seem to have an abundance of both..

[blakjassy]

this is beautiful... thoughts flowing through words. Some may see just a story, others may find deep symbolism in it. Either way it is lovely

[....]

This is so darling, love this...xo

[Sweets]

This is so sweet and I loved the mood in this poem!
Great work!

[emmajoy]

A kiss like that is such a precious wee gift .. wouldn't it be wonderful if we could each keep one in a heart pocket all life long!

Beautiful in its brevity - and memorable!

[x]

maybe you weren't trying to say something specific but it's a great study in context and shared experiences that everyone can relate to in some way. The title really helps bring it together too, it's so fluffily adorable.

[Marie Harrison]

Who doesn't love a kiss?
Love the title, kittens and puppies.
Melts well with the kisses
to me.

[Emily B]

kisses gain importance depending on the age of the giver, i'm trying to store up all the little girl kisses i can

[Phibby Venable]

like the sudden action & surprise & how pleased the poet sounds!
very fine writing.

[Ed Hart]

my 'couldn't say anything at all' moments didn't follow any kisses...congratulations on your good fortune