"The Faerie..." Poem

"The Faerie..."

Sparkles
and moonbeams
and hummingbirds
- just so,
A floating halo...

Honeysuckle
and lavendar
scents
wafting so near -
twisting, sidling,
inveigling within...

Weeping-willow fronds
drape softly closed
and hovering
hiding, shielding,
embracing...

awaits - right there...
as she -
lips upturned to heaven's heights
eyes half-lidded with heart's full weight
knows so very, very deeply within
- his lips brushed her soul
again -
and for'er marked her... his.

Chris

Author's Note

...echoes...

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

How did I miss this one ...

Everything right where we dreamed it would be..

A floating halo indeed .

Beautiful.. draws me in and takes me back, to the times and kisses that branded me.... HIS

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww .... Jazz

[Constance Payne]

Wonderfully written, hidden love is often the most powerful to the heart.

I like the image of the willow closing its fronds softly around...

[Ken Simm.]

Oh I do like the Sidhe. But don't tell them. Having written this I think you must be a changeling.

[Chris]

I kind of like THAT thought...thanks Ken.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Beautiful and surreal.

[Chris]

I hope all is going well with you?

[zainul]

Amazing poem

[Chris]

Nice of you to pause with me...

[zainul]

This was a great pleasure for me :)

[olla]

"white silver bells
upon a slender stalk
lilies of the valley
deck my garden walk
oh don't you wish
that you could hear them ring
that will happen only when the Faeries sing.."
awaits - right there...

"as she -
lips upturned to heaven's heights
eyes half-lidded with heart's full weight
knows so very, very deeply within
- his lips brushed her soul
again -
and for'er marked her... his."




an old folk song.. you made me think of it.. I wonder if that is why the Faerie sings...

[Teri B]

Sweetly ethereal and whimsical!

[Muse]

I really get sick and tired of all the cliche a*s stuff people write about, but you take a overwrote topic and give it new life! And I'm a word nerd, I loved the part:

inveigling within
and for'er marked her... his.




Nice=!

[Jeremy Baker]

I love the ephemera and gentleness that surround these words. When I closed my eyes and spoke the words I could picture everything so clearly, and myself within its midst. It was a lovely feeling. Thanks for sharing!