"Kissed..." Poem

breathing and listening to the mind echoes ~

she's right there

right there

there in front of...

there

there

here

here

so softly close

feel the held breath

tense

tension

waiting

eyes so fluttering

lids

lidded

halves...so slowly turning

bending

forming

Oh-s

leaning

leaning

touching

touching

I's

taste tasting

feeling

warm soft flowing to tighter

pressure

pressing

taste tasting heat -

so softly twisting

floating

away...

almo  s  t  breathing

al  m   o   s  t

falling

drawing

drawing back

pulling back HARD

HARDER...

here...

her  e . . .

there...

there...

 

breathe...

"Kissed..."

Chris

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[Amy Bumpas]

This is a very teasing and seductive piece...loved this:))

[brenda]

wow :o i had the image of someone kissing in my mind this is awesome love the poem !:)

[Christie Moses]

Nothing sweeter than kisses, unless its the anticipation right before it ;) I loved this. Wonderful ;)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very warm sweet poem. Those first kisses. I remember it well.

[Kat Collins]

Reading this, I am in the moment, living the first kiss. I love your layout of the poem - really sets up the pace - The suspense, the anticipation...perfect.

[Tasha]

This was wonderful and cleverly written.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Cardinal Robin]

Wicked and profoundly right. You capture both the innocence of the moment and the sensuality for those of us well into the void. I like your use of word structuring and how it affects the perceived pacing.

[Jeremy Baker]

Very cleverly written!

[Kerry O'Connor]

Not easy to capture that moment of the first kiss... always the anticipation has seemed more magical to me than the physical touch itself. You nailed it.