"Kissed..." Poem

breathing and listening to the mind echoes ~

she's right there

right there

there in front of...

there

there

here

here

so softly close

feel the held breath

tense

tension

waiting

eyes so fluttering

lids

lidded

halves...so slowly turning

bending

forming

Oh-s

leaning

leaning

touching

touching

I's

taste tasting

feeling

warm soft flowing to tighter

pressure

pressing

taste tasting heat -

so softly twisting

floating

away...

almo  s  t  breathing

al  m   o   s  t

falling

drawing

drawing back

pulling back HARD

HARDER...

here...

her  e . . .

there...

there...

 

breathe...

"Kissed..."

Chris

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

Wow, I feel like I've been swept off my feet! A kiss is so revealing, and I think its one of the most passionate things two people can share.

[Chris]

Kell... good seeing you - again.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Kissed'
Chris,
This was amazing. You describe the influence of a kiss on the life, heart, emotions. It is done in very small doses and a person is able to experience the lovely romance of romance! It also reminded me of the inner molecular reality as if the kiss is a living thing. Very nice.
Bless ya!
Kathy

[Chris]

Purring here...

[A Soap Mess Stories]

So sensual...romantical...delish...

[A Soap Mess Stories]

So sensual...romantical...delish...

[Ruth]

Descriptive and I think I can relax my spine now lol

[Bewitching Sensations]

gosh! i could actually feel that kiss.. well done

[Chris]

tell me you lifted a foot...

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Good...........great and lovely.

[Chris]

I appreciate your pausing with my thoughts... thank you.

[Renée]

Oh my...
"Do that to me one more time, once is never enough with man like you".. giggle ( ;

[Chris]

you are "bad" in the nicest ways... chuckling here...

[Heather]

wow I felt every second.. my heart beat faster with every word and left me feeling kissed

[olla]

damn.....