"Just Walking In The Rain..." Poem

Its always within an individual's perceptions - isn't it?

Sometimes poetry is about life and sometimes it isn't.

...and sometimes we deal,
Sometimes we don't...

Sometimes we watch the 'Game'
from half a world away... ya know?

"Just Walking In The Rain..."

He said
then she said
and he said "Some more???."

Then she said
and he said
and she said, "What for?"

Then THEY said
that we said
so none said, "Its time..."

and I said,
"I wish that
I'd never been a mime."

Chris

Author's Note

facetious and light... a child's rhyme... give it some thought.

Say as you like - feel free

I think we all play "He said and she said and he said" - with gender having placement according to a specific recognition of personal interest. People - of all ages and (I believe) unrelated to any race or religious designations have fantasies of attraction and personal interactions. For some its dreams, hopes, wishes; for some its dark - obsessions... but people have them. ...and in the end all we wanted was company along our ways - ya know?

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Potato potatoe, tomato tomatoe- let’s call the whole thing off- I c said the blind man to his deaf and dub daughter sitting at the corner of the round table-🌹... great words you have here- unless you agree to diagree🌹

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Just walking the Rain"
Chris,
Identifiable to me as all the media scramble which goes on. Like you've written; He said, she said. Things are repeated forwards and backwards.
Kathy

[zainul]

This is meant to share and interact with readers.
It is still relevant and may be brought for discussion again.
Nicely expressed yourself.

[olla]

too many time I have "wished I I had never been a mime..." too late.. too soon..

[sharonlee]

Company along our ways... for however long or brief....

Shar

[Lily Mae]

Thank you for sharing this Chris.. :) x

[Daytonight]

This brought a smile to my face and a chuckle. Thanks for sharing this! Great write. Keep on penning.

[Chris]

Chris,

Check your email for why I use "Poem" after the posted title...

Take care,
Chris

[Emily B]

perceptions mean so much . . . it amazes me that the same voice can be both soft and hard . . . depending on the mood of the speaker. sometimes he says can hurt and sometimes it can heal.