"Just Friends..."

"Just Friends..."

I whispered your name
today
- again,

and yesterday
- did you feel the air touch your cheek?

I don't know why
I do
whisper
toward you -
still,

but then again
"just friends" do that -

ya know?

Chris

Author's Note

Say as you like - feel free

"Can't we JUST be FRIENDS..."

Reviews

[?]

That was wonderful. Friends are great.
Loved the lines:
I whispered your name
today
- again,

and yesterday
- did you feel the air touch your cheek?

When one is really close to another, seems as though you can actually feel the air touch ones cheek.
This was wonderful and heartfelt, touching. Enjoyed this one

[Emily B]

I told someone the other day that my phone didn't ring but I knew they were thinking of me . . . because sometimes we are like that

[Chris]

Hadaka... THAT was good!... thanks

[Bare Bohemian]

I heard the whisper
and felt the air touch my cheek
just as I passed gas

[imawriter]

makes me smile, but with a drop of water in my eye....

[Jason Shadows]

Amazing Feelings From Within. Look Toward To A Better Friendship With A Friend And Maybe Even Getting Closer.

I Like This One Chris. Very Powerful And Explosive With Words. Keep Up Them Coming.