"Dreams And..."

"Dreams And..."

Seems we live in the starlight,

and dream as we follow the sunlight -

eyes and breath drawn to

golden warmth and filling mellow heat

that holds all that we are,

were,

will be...

as I's meld into we's

and we's melt into

us...

and our taste IS

the breath we exhale,

and our thoughts are 

the flow of senses

and woven nows

that blend existence into futures past

and presents that become...

dreams and...

me's.

Chris

Author's Note

Feel free

Reviews

[R.L.Russ]

I feel in love with this and I agree the "as I's meld into we's
and we's melt into
us..." is too perfect! Look forward to reading more!

[Chris]

I appreciate your pausing and look forward to your return

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful journey in your words and thoughts my friend.
"as I's meld into we's
and we's melt into
us..."
The above lines are perfect. I like the places you took the reader to. Thank you Chris for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[MICASA]

Very well written Chris...keep it up, the good work...looking up for more stuffs from u !💐

[emmajoy]

'our taste IS -- the breath we exhale, -- and our thoughts are -- the flow of senses -- and woven nows.. '

Night dreams an' plans an' picnics can escape us.. making for the distant hills.. BUT oh those daydreams, the ones that capture us for seconds at a time and.. leave us wanting.. more. My thoughts after reading your words, you nudge thoughts and emotions, you do, sir. .

[Chris]

Its been awhile Em, hope life is being nice.

[Lance Sheridan]

Chris, a well-composed, free flowing verse that leaves the reader satisfied.

[Chris]

But does it really? Does life really? Fair questions I think.

[Bell Appleton]

Beautifully written. Touches the heart, once again.

[Chris]

Ahhhhhhhhhhh... a captive audience...

[SZHZIA]

Nice writing with nice choice of words... simply loving it.

Best
Szhzia

[Chris]

Thank you for pausing AND for leaving your thoughts... hope you return.

[T. Edana Talbott]

This was like a breath of fresh air. It's amazing, the connections that are formed in life - how souls and beings and moments can all blend into one beautiful experience. I loved this.

[Chris]

Hi Edana... interesting choice of pause. We - each of us - touch upon others and hence touch our selves.

[T. Edana Talbott]

Couldn't agree more!

[maricoona91]

How strange it is for people to mold together over time. It's put so well.
I am imagining it molding like clay.
Thanks

[Diamond]

I simply loved the way you left your thoughts free, yet sensitive....in this poem