"Dreams And..."

"Dreams And..."

Seems we live in the starlight,

and dream as we follow the sunlight -

eyes and breath drawn to

golden warmth and filling mellow heat

that holds all that we are,

were,

will be...

as I's meld into we's

and we's melt into

us...

and our taste IS

the breath we exhale,

and our thoughts are 

the flow of senses

and woven nows

that blend existence into futures past

and presents that become...

dreams and...

me's.

Chris

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Emberlorna]

I have read a few of your glorious works so far and I am entirely taken by the way you write with such expressive and soul-touching beauty. This one, how you dance and play with emotions and the senses.. You are so truly gifted and one of the finest poets I've ever come across on this site. Thank you for sharing.

[Chris]

You are welcome to pause anytime... speak your mind if so driven... nice meeting you.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

"Woven nows that blend existence into futures past and presents that become..dreams and me's"-Chris, this is so uniquely, magnificently, you. Kaleidoscopic, moving in All directions and then, honing in, and perfectly, coming home....Master Class work. Kudos!

[apennylate]

I am seemingly lost in the me's and sulfurous bleeding of syllables seen. Kept my breath the whole verse, and wove a delicious treat for my mind's eye. Superbly penned...

[M. L. F.]

Very connected piece. It highlights the inner workings of us as humans... of how we live and love and become one with another... so to speak. The piece has a thread through it... if that makes sense. Good work...
..Misty

[...]

So romantic and quite captivating. Your words are lush and loving. Some very memorable lines...

'as I's meld into we's
and we's melt into
us...
and our taste IS
the breath we exhale,'

I enjoyed this a lot. Starz

[Chris]

Nice having you stop-by...

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was quite romantic and beautiful indeed. :)
Seems you put allot of thought and heart into this piece :)
Great write Chris :)

[Chris]

Thank you for pausing and sharing your time and thoughts.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your most welcome :)

[Ken Simm.]

I am amazed. The quality of your romances are superb.

[Pratikshya Garabadu]

its just awesome!!!.....dreams to be cherished ....

[Neal S]

I just love this. Wonderfully written.

[Chris]

Thank you for pausing with me.

[Neal S]

Most Welcome.

[aLittlePain]

Hello Chris, beautifully expressed uplifting words. Indeed dreams dwell here. R xo

[Chris]

Hi Ray... you left thoughtful words... was this really that bad then?