"It Is Spring..."

we never know the other side of tomorrow til we look in our eyes...

 

"It Is Spring..."

 

I miss the moments of our sun,

breaths so softly held and shared -

even the tears hurt more - ya know?

and a smile ...held me so close.

 

I see your footsteps through my world -

noseprints on the glass.

Hear your voice behind my eyes

and know it's your hand touching me.

 

I LIVE the music in the air

the silliness of tiptoes as I turn a corner -

just to see      ...the silence of the walls

and feel the breath softly leave.

 

It is finally Spring

and I look and I look

and ...I LOOK and almost see

your eyes gazing back from within.

 

...and I breathe...

again.

 

Chris

Author's Note

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Reviews

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You know how deeply I feel this, Chris...

[KelWriter]

Very lovely poem. "I live the music in the air" has to be one of my favorite lines. I'm glad you shared this creative piece of work

[RattyAdalan]

I am impressed... delicate poem which is like alive! Can inspire and make a reflections. The Point touch the reader. Really very well. Regards :)

[Chris]

It was nice of you to pause with me Ratty...come by any time.

[Corset]

I miss, I see, I LIVE, I LOOK...and I breathe...again. Everything else in between is icing in the Twinkies.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Spring.. a resurrection of life ...
A remembrance of Joy, in being
Green, that new smell, and taste
A fancy, let loose ... to grow
Spring, always within..waiting..
To bloom..


Well done Chris.............. ♥

JAZZ

[MrsBear]

No words. You have done it again, blowing me away with your amazing poetry. This is exactly what I imagine when picturing a young loving couple lying on the grass on a fine spring day. Maybe the boy in this poem is remembering the times he used to share with his lover?

[Coyote Poetry]

Dear Spring. She is needed.
"It is finally Spring
and I look and I look
and ...I LOOK and almost see
your eyes gazing back from within."
I'm glad Spring is here. Everything seem more alive and beautiful. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Chris]

Thanks John, good seeing you again.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Chris. My pleasure to read your words.

[Jamestown]

Fantastic write, wonderfully worded pulling at the heart strings!
Imagery very clear and strong, I enjoyed reading, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Chris]

Thanks for your thoughtful words Jamestown...

[Jamestown]

U R welcome:)