"Scintillating..."

"Scintillating..."

A Poem by Chris
"

Play with words and tones

"

“Scintillating…”

 

“Scintillating,” the taste of

…You…

on my …lips.  The feel of fingers’ tips.

In MY mind - you pause …all thought       with

HEAT - drawing, beckoning - becoming

incarnate …carnal…credible…wishing-full-LIFE.

YOU are Sin          ‘til late     (y)our - pounding, pulsing heart(s)

(y)our being -

encompasses e v e r y thing I am AND we are.

 

You ARE MY Sin - titillating, deaerating

coruscating - The core of US shaking - reverberating

sin-filled-lightning

insinuating - Insinyouwaiting

deliciously insidiously deciduously baring

body, heart, being… to my eyes and touch

your kiss…brush…press…my hold…tightening

turningyearningWANTING

…awaiting…rising…becoming

the very need of being …and finally…one… us.

 

Chris

© 2015 Chris


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Chris...this is...wow...creation! You are a truly gifted man. A favorite for sure :) Oh I will be back!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I echo Nadia; quite ingenious. I love the flow and the way you incorporate scintillating in so many different forms; and the use of 'deciduously baring,' is so. so original and clever.

Beccy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ingenious, brilliant, playful, eloquent, sensual, and very sexual.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chris

10 Years Ago

THIS was an intriguing review... and left a smile behind.
Oh...ahhh...even more breathless than usual

A writing/experience

"Insinyouwating" ....... sigh

wow.......................................

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is one of those that will make a reader blush, so much intent in this wonderful write, in the end, as one, wonderful!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on February 21, 2015
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