"Scintillating..."

Play with words and tones

“Scintillating…”

 

“Scintillating,” the taste of

…You…

on my …lips.  The feel of fingers’ tips.

In MY mind - you pause …all thought       with

HEAT - drawing, beckoning - becoming

incarnate …carnal…credible…wishing-full-LIFE.

YOU are Sin          ‘til late     (y)our - pounding, pulsing heart(s)

(y)our being -

encompasses e v e r y thing I am AND we are.

 

You ARE MY Sin - titillating, deaerating

coruscating - The core of US shaking - reverberating

sin-filled-lightning

insinuating - Insinyouwaiting

deliciously insidiously deciduously baring

body, heart, being… to my eyes and touch

your kiss…brush…press…my hold…tightening

turningyearningWANTING

…awaiting…rising…becoming

the very need of being …and finally…one… us.

 

Chris

Author's Note

Feel Free

Reviews

[nazia]

Description of love in such a passionate manner and the description of "she" in almost all the amazing adjectives any person would like to be described as... She is really lucky. great piece

[Ken Simm.]

When I am drawing I feel that if a line looks as if it should go in a certain direction then it should. There are very few who understand this process in writing. You obviously do and it gives brillance such as this an extra flowing life.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Your playful way with words and this unfolding right to end are wonderful.
It bring forth the feelings, emotions, and love that is shared.
So many feelings being released as it progresses here.
Nice work.

[Michael G.]

I think without a doubt, "she" read this, with a smile growing bigger and bigger. Sexy, sensuous, total devotion of love.
I enjoyed all your delicious play on words and how they form, mix, mingle, and become so many things that you intentionally brought to the reader.
Outstanding work as always, my old friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. You used the words like the ancient Donne.
"You ARE MY Sin - titillating, deaerating
coruscating - The core of US shaking - reverberating
sin-filled-lightning
insinuating - Insinyouwaiting "
I had to read a few times to grasp and enjoy the language and thoughts in the poetry. Thank you my friend for sharing your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Jamestown]

Brilliant piece of work! The delivery to this write is amazing, talk about
sucking the reader in, well done! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Chris]

Thanks man... I appreciate your insight.

[SpitfireGrrrl]

Delectable words - caused a flush. Which are the best kind of words.

[Chris]

I appreciate your pausing and finding a "smile"...

[sharonlee]

I'd comment, if I could breathe.

[~]

Whoa.. I see lots and lots of smoldering aaaaall the way from here :) A kaleidoscope of feelings.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love it when a man redefines Webster!

Hope you're staying warm...I'll send you some warm California sun to melt some of that snow!